Okay, this is my first critique, so please be patient with me.
Vision: I give this a 4.5 because this is quite the looker of a piece. I love the shadowing, and how you made their eyes almost seem real, like what you would see in a movie, perhaps.
Originality: I only gave this a 3 because most people would normally draw themselves anyway. But as I see, no other would draw themselves in THIS way, normally. So I love the uniqueness of this deviation.
Technique and Impact I find inapplicable, because I'm not sure if you meant this to be at all inspiring.
hehe.... thanx bro! but uh, im confused by how u said people dont draw themselves THAT way.... did i do somethin wrong?
and i didnt draw it for any reason exactly cuz i was just bored and i had an idea.... so ya